kind of rude...
of you to condescend to your audience like that. most kids have to watch it in school as a really decent display of the way our judicial system is supposed to work.
i liked the style of this, but i fail to see how it is a... 'response'. i'd expect a response to try to give your perspective about the story, but all this seems to be is a filling in of the blanks of the moments not shown in the story. nyeh. i dunno really what your assignment was, but if i asked a class to give a 'response' to something and got this, i would grade it poorly, since i get no sense at all about how you felt about the issues therein.